So my girlfriend writes fiction all the time, and it inspired me to give it a try. Fiction isn't really my strong point, though I love to write. I'm writing a personal biography of something that happened o be, and honestly it can get slow at times. Solution? Write something created from my imagination. So I did. The first chapters up, theres a warning, but all it is is post sex and swearing. Really nothing too bad. Please comment on it! I need feedback, something more then "Great job Carson!" or "Yay!" come one pepole, its flattering, but I need to be constructive! What was good? What was bad? Anyway, I hope you guys take a look at it and enjoy!